That's very good, actually. Direct, and to the point.

[And to think, at one point in time, she thought Jinx was beyond help or saving. Vi really had been right, those many months ago. She isn't going to be best friends with her, or even necessarily like her, but she has more pity for the girl than she did long ago.]

You could work on the wording, a little. Maybe "it made me feel like you didn't care how it would affect me?"